
Triggering subject
Composition decomposed
A poem emerges
I'm reading a bit about poetry. Just a bit.
There's something called, The Triggering
Subject, which represents the kernel of the
idea that initially brings your pencil/pen
to paper or fingers to the keyboard. At least
that's poet Richard Hugo's take on it. But don't
get the idea that this kernel is a foundation, of
sorts, from which you construct your poem. Not
so! The trick is to get away from that triggering
subject, lest it subjugates you, and explore the
nooks and crannies of imagination that sometimes
gets lost in the drive to "communicate". It's an
interesting notion that didn't make sense to me
at first, but now I get. Imagination flutters on
its own breeze and is lost if caged. The triggering
subject is simply the launching pad from which
you plunge into the unknown. Here's my first
attempt at using this technique. By the way,
it's really fun to see where things go.
Situation Room
What's the situation in the situation room?
Here's the situation in the situation room.
Jump rope mantra, playgrounds, pigtails,
Around the world arms lift and dip,
Hot pepper 1-2-3-4, fast
Faster, pump it up, Double Dutch.
What's the situation in the situation room?
Here's the situation in the situation room.
Leather wingbacks, sleeves to elbows.
Madame Secretary sneezes
Operation Super Mario
High stakes, hot poker, poker-faced.
That's the situation in the situation room.
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